its lemons oooo lol i take requests and hopefully am getting back in the swing of things :3
Everyone shut up, like bro he is totally just being nice and saying hi before we get sexed on.. duhhh
Again spelling error and I love this story nothing wrong with it. Just can't help but point out some of the spelling errors. And it's " yelle "
Just a bit of constructive criticism, you've got your "yours" mixed.
You're is a contraction for you are
Your is possessive, like your house or your dog.
Just wanted to help, I'm not trying to be not picky or anything.
Privet means 'Hello'....
*internal screaming over how much I wanna fix this story*
woahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh woah woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh woah woah woah *nosebleeds*
You guys not every one is good with grammar. Stop criticizing them :l