The journey of love....{#YourStoryIndia}

The journey of love....{#YourStoryIndia}

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jinal soni By A_Book_Diva Completed

How would you feel when you are forced to move away from you family, friends and the birth place where you lived for 24 years of your life.?? yeah ! thats exactly how she felt when he blackmailed her to do that.

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Everything was going on as planned in both of their life until both had an unpleasent encounter with eachother and that changes everything between them. He took her to London with him inorder to take a revenge and make her life up side down. 

Did it happened...??

Have a look.

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It's my first book so pardon me if there are any spelling mistakes or other errors.

Chaptr is awsm...nd i cant even imagn mah lyf widout chclt!!
purnima52 purnima52 Nov 24, 2015
hey I love your writing style seriously.... you are awesome... this chapter was great...:-)
Elizaema Elizaema Jan 07, 2015
Mumbai is in fact the city that never sleeps, haha, that was a very beautiful chapter! Just make sure you leave some spaces between every three or four lines so it feels a bit relaxed. If everything is stuck together then it feels a bit tight and uncomfortable!
Elizaema Elizaema Jan 07, 2015
that was a very good beginning, the punctuation and the spelling were good and it looks very interesting!
                              But make sure you edit the spelling mistakes in your description because it's the first thing people see about your book! It should make them wanna open the first page! Otherwise it was amazing!