Ashes, Ashes We All Fall Down

Ashes, Ashes We All Fall Down

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hannahgriffin By hannahgriffin Updated Dec 12, 2010

Ashes, Ashes We All Fall Down.

                        "The earth is mad. It is growling at us. Is it sick?"

 Those were the last thoughts I every thought. Every one says when you die your life flashes before you. That didn't happen. Let me begin. I am Helimara I was twenty three when I died. Pompeii was my home. Now I am here in nothingness where all I can do is tell you how I died; I guess they got it partially right I am telling you my life story aren't I?

            I am in love. Today is my wedding day! "Get out of here!" I screamed to my fiancé, Desidero. "You must go! You mustn't see me like this!"

I am one of those people who are quite superstitious. The day will be good if I wake up and Desidero is already working in his garden. The day will be bad if he comes inside just as I am awaking. Well that is what was happening right at that very moment.

              I started weeping. Desidero came over and asked, "This isn't one of your superstitions is it?" I slowly nodded, ...

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Everlong Everlong Jan 26, 2011
Great writting, the first Paragraph really draws you into the story, and like mariel46 wrote, it really did have me hooked the entire time, really really Really!, Nice job, keep writting..