Mary Williams is the new girl.
Jacob Rena is the hot, popular guy.
Caitlyn Rena is the obssesive ex girlfriend.
What happens when a new girl comes?
Its very fast and you might want to describe things a little clearer nut otherwise its a good story and i like the plot! x
@WeiYe thx! i will definently work on my grammer. thx for telling me!
awsum story, just need 2 work a little on ur grammar, but besides that it was great! :)
i agree kirsty 1000 but ur story ur pix ur rules lol luv it doe im contuin on =)
oh forgot to add - i'm not to keen on the pic of him, but that's my opinion so don;t change it or anything! like i said before i like brunettes!! the guy is cute and has a nice stomach though!
oh how old are the characters? you might want to add that in.....xx
it's a good start - good desription of the characters!! i'm liking the sound of Jacob already even though i usually go for brunettes!! ha ha lol!