He Loves Me?????

He Loves Me?????

46.5K Reads 533 Votes 16 Part Story
Catherine By catherinesays43110 Completed

Mary Williams is the new girl. 


Jacob Rena is the hot, popular guy.


Caitlyn Rena is the obssesive ex girlfriend.


What happens when a new girl comes?

fashiongirl1996 fashiongirl1996 Jul 30, 2010
Its very fast and you might want to describe things a little clearer nut otherwise its a good story and i like the plot! x
catherinesays43110 catherinesays43110 Jul 29, 2010
@WeiYe thx! i will definently work on my grammer. thx for telling me!
Jynx3d Jynx3d Jul 29, 2010
awsum story, just need 2 work a little on ur grammar, but besides that it was great! :)
LadyAsphodel LadyAsphodel Jul 28, 2010
i agree kirsty 1000 but ur story ur pix ur rules lol luv it doe im contuin on =)
kirsty1000 kirsty1000 Jul 27, 2010
oh forgot to add - i'm not to keen on the pic of him, but that's my opinion so don;t change it or anything! like i said before i like brunettes!! the guy is cute and has a nice stomach though!
                              
                              oh how old are the characters? you might want to add that in.....xx
kirsty1000 kirsty1000 Jul 27, 2010
it's a good start - good desription of the characters!! i'm liking the sound of Jacob already even though i usually go for brunettes!! ha ha lol!