The Possessive Beta (Book 1) (EDITED AND REVISED)|| WATTYS2016

The Possessive Beta (Book 1) (EDITED AND REVISED)|| WATTYS2016

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Chocolate-Lover93 By Chocolate-Lover93 Completed

Reanne Abby Lawson a 17 year old werewolf has yet to find a mate. She belongs to the Red Glare Pack. What happens when she goes to the mating ceremony.
Jayden Ethan Willikins is the Red Glare pack's beta. What happens when he goes to the mating ceremony? Read to find out!

_bad-ass_ _bad-ass_ Oct 13
Awesome so far! 
                              And Riley is a girls and a boys name! In my book the girls name is Riley too, i swear i didn't copy, i wrote my book before i read this one😂
Please tell me I'm not the only one who skipped most of the descriptions 😝
Chocolate-Lover93 Chocolate-Lover93 Feb 27, 2015
Thanks aisyas for the feedback! :) ill be sure to make it easier for the next chapters
aisyas aisyas Feb 27, 2015
Its good. It was a littls hard to read. Nothing a run through can't fix. Also, I don't think you have to say it's from her pov. Just write and we'll be able to pick up on that.