He Looks Like a God, But is he One Too? (Exquisite Attraction)(On hold)

He Looks Like a God, But is he One Too? (Exquisite Attraction)(On hold)

42.5K Reads 644 Votes 19 Part Story
Emily By caramelapplee Updated Nov 19, 2010

Sixteen year old Fallon meets mysterious Kevin one night when she was hanging out with her friends. There's no mistaking it, she was in love with him from first sight. But there's something strange about him. Like how he can appear out of no where at any time. And how people sometimes get angry or faint around him. He was gorgeous, but I'm not sure his good looks were enough to make you faint. Then Fallon meets his sister, who hates her from first sight. Fallon doesn't know why, until she's thrusted into the world that she use to think were only tales or how do you say, mythology? :)

_ditzii _ditzii Nov 20, 2010
@dreamybanana WOAH, that's LOOONG.
                              
                              And YES< it's really good, NOT BAD, may have a little grammatical errors but oh wells, still really good! Keep going!
caramelapplee caramelapplee Aug 23, 2010
@ErickaArmstead Your welcome :D Everyone needs a confidence boost right? Especially when it comes to writing.
caramelapplee caramelapplee Aug 23, 2010
@ErickaArmstead Thanks :). I hope I'm a great writer. Glad you like the story (and Kevin) already :D
caramelapplee caramelapplee Aug 23, 2010
@ErickaArmstead Thank you! Glad you voted and thanks for fanning!
ErickaArmstead ErickaArmstead Aug 23, 2010
OH MY GOSH that was reallly good i went down and i was like wheres the rest of it:))) i can tell youre a geat writer!!! cant wait to read the next chapter ooo and i like Kevin already:) haha
                              
                              ~Ericka~
ErickaArmstead ErickaArmstead Aug 23, 2010
nice description:)) at the top i def cant wait to read the story good job you laready  have a vote now off to the story:))