When u say smirking inwardly I just picture the skin red meat structure under the face smileing
*has to look up what retrospect means* yeah I totally know that word...............................now
*has already read the story* ha that the least of your worry's
Anyone else see the rape that kids making in the picture above this?
Just read this and may I say I am quite intrigued by this story. And I agree with @annieafterlife I personally think you should continue from Kid's P.O.V. Keep up the good work!
I'd continue from Kid's P.O.V I like reading from Kid's perspective but your the author. Great job I can't wait to read more!