Just read this and may I say I am quite intrigued by this story. And I agree with @annieafterlife I personally think you should continue from Kid's P.O.V. Keep up the good work!
I'd continue from Kid's P.O.V I like reading from Kid's perspective but your the author. Great job I can't wait to read more!
@annieafterlife your plea has motivated me to /GANBATE/... -ahem- work hard.