Searching for Death

Searching for Death

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liv By speckolivia Completed

"I saw you sitting here, you the most beautiful little thing I've ever seen, depressed and alone. I looked into your eyes and I saw that you were going through some messed up shit and it broke me. I want to get to know you. I want to put light back in your blue eyes"

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Anastasia Peterson has certainly been through it all. She's experienced the loss of her mother and the insanity of her father. She's anorexic, depressed and suicidal. Anastasia is planning to die, and she most certainly wants to follow through on he plan. But Anastasia catches Parker Fields' eye. He's a tall, handsome jock. Parker plans to save her from the most dangerous thing in her life- herself. And he certainly wants to follow through on that plan.

This is the best way to start a story because now people would want to know what happens next
craftsman90 craftsman90 Nov 15
I believe the technical term is a hook an? I could be wrong, though.
I was actually going to be named Anastasia... But now it's Ashley... I hate my name for some reason... ;^;
Which way is her nickname pronounced Anna like in frozen or ana?
that is a the best way to start a story and if I read a story with a bad beginning then I stop reading and this makes me want to know what happens right now
Chrissy782 Chrissy782 Feb 28
This is the best way to start a story, because if you start I'm the middle of the dialogue readers want to know what's happening