Royal Mayhem (Royals series #1) #Wattys2015

Royal Mayhem (Royals series #1) #Wattys2015

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Samantha Jayne By SamanthaJayne_x Completed

Melinda Brown is a simple girl, living an ordinary life. She dreams of the day that she can fulfil all her dreams. Prince Alexander George is living the extraordinary life, surrounded by riches and spoilt to the core. Everything he's ever wanted has been at the tip of his finger due to his prestigious status as future King of England. Despite coming from two different worlds, the two share a common learning institution. One day everything changes when the two crash into each other's lives, literally. As they both enter each other's worlds, they're forced to make compromises for the sake of their growing attraction. Will Melinda and Alexander be able to win people with their love, especially when it becomes clear that they both hide secrets? Or will Prince Alexander be denied for the first time by the first woman that he truly wants? Not everything is as it seems in Royal Mayhem!

J-e-m77 J-e-m77 Aug 29
Liking the story, but way too many 'I's in it.  Apologies if it sounds like I'm having a go.
This description sounds word for word like my university 😂😂 I'd laugh if we went to the same one!
Its pretty good for a first chapter but i found that i wasnt able to distinguish who was the pov until u introduced her name in the middle. Maybe if u add whose pov id on the top it'll be better for the reader? Thats just me so id really appreciate it! :)
carrotdirection99 carrotdirection99 Nov 08, 2015
Edit this please. :) It sounds like a awesome story but the spacing and errors are frustrating. Please have a quick read of this and make longer paragraphs shorter. :)))) I love the story line and characters though.
AnnWrites AnnWrites Jun 24, 2015
despite the standard rich-guy/poor girl situation, it's very believable. You drew up both characters very well, Melinda is very likeable. A hard-working, sensible, drama-free girl. She knew how to put the prince in his place. I'm guessing their paths will cross often.
ks_dreamer ks_dreamer Jun 20, 2015
Oh what a great beginning to the story! I love how descriptive it is!