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The Viking Chase

The Viking Chase

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Sam Bryan By kissmybutt101 Updated Jul 13, 2016

Twigs quietly snapped as I moved my heavy feet towards the pond where the singing was coming from. 
Heart beating with excitement I drew closer until I could see through the branches to the figure in the water. My gods was the painful walk through the the thorns were worth it. In the middle of the water was the back of a naked girl washing herself. She had beautiful long black locks that swept the water's surface where it rested at her waist. Her hair was so dark it contrasted sharply with her milky white skin. 
Everything in me wanted to go to her but I knew a strong Viking warrior covered in blood might frighten her away. For now I'll enjoy my view and wait for the chance to see the young maidens face. Once I know what she looks like then I can search for her face within in the village not far from here.
A cruel smile of a predator spread across my face as I anticipated the hunt for my prey later, one that would not end until I got what I wanted. 

Sorry I'm not good at descriptions so I put a sneak peek in instead. Not sure where I'm going with this but I randomly got this idea and wanted to get in down before I forgot.

I love the way you started out in your book. Can't wait to read more. THANK YOU
RheaAllexsa RheaAllexsa Jan 02
I love this book and all but how do u pronounce aofi or whatever the spelling is?
moonstoneheart moonstoneheart May 05, 2015
Maybe change this part to: "Each time a man falls another comes to take his place almost as if they are glad someone will finally put an end to their miserable lives."
- - Jan 03, 2015
awesome story!! wanna check mine out and let me know what you think?
caspeana caspeana Jan 03, 2015
great beginning, i am already hooked. hopefully you will continue the story