"I'm going to make you marry me." I said.
Then I fell in hell.
He gave me pain and agony, I gave him myself.
He gave me sufferings, I gave him my love.
He made me his toy, I made him my king.
He jailed me in hell, I forced him in my 7th heaven..
** Alam agad ng organizer ang usapan nila? hmmm... (peace tayo hahaha!)
Review: ** made this bold or put some spaces before this part. Para may palatandaan na separate scene na ito. Kanina kasi ang setting, the night before the wedding. This part naman ay araw na mismo ng kasal ;)
Blue tux on a wedding day? You gave justice to the "universal and different kind of motif and theme" . Good. Good. :)
No need for the open and close parenthesis. Italicizing the words are enough to convey that he was talking thru a phone call :)
Dapat kasi nag silent wedding na lang sila hahaha chaaaar! next chappie :)
@ILoveTsokolet hahaha ok lang. just vote and comment hihi gaganahan akong magUD