My ex best friend.

My ex best friend.

15 Part Story 125K Reads 1.5K Votes
Shelby By shelbyhegglund Updated Dec 11, 2011

Jen also none as Blaze has hated Jake Rider for the last six years. They were once best friends and now are enemies. Jake knows every button to push when it come to Jen. He plays tricks on her constantly and is detemind not to stop.  So what happens to there ex friendship when they share a hot kiss in front of the whole school and hear howling at night.

- - Mar 21, 2012 10:21PM
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that in the description you might wanna change the word "none" to "known" in the first sentence, and capitalize your title, :)
Akanae Akanae Nov 10, 2011 04:37AM
Good start to the story but the time line is off. In chapter one you said she hadn't been in six years and in this chapter, she hadn't been in three.
zulyyforgetter zulyyforgetter Oct 05, 2011 05:20AM
Please updated as soon as u can I can't wait this is one of favorite books
shelbyhegglund shelbyhegglund Aug 15, 2011 01:14AM
@LoveMeHateMe88 Thanks and I guess Jakes pretty perceptive. :)
LoveMeHateMe88 LoveMeHateMe88 Aug 14, 2011 06:34PM
When they were in the locker room and Blaze was thinking about hurting him he said 'you don't want to do that'. Lol such a mystery how he new that! I think your first story is doing really great so far :)
suziep suziep Jul 15, 2011 12:09AM
wow great chapter please upload again soon cant wait to see what happens next keep up the good work