WITH EVERY BREATH YOU TAKE

WITH EVERY BREATH YOU TAKE

10.9K Reads 99 Votes 20 Part Story
widevrybreathutake By widevrybreathutake Updated Nov 20, 2010

ROMANCE

RebeccaElizabethHill RebeccaElizabethHill Jun 12, 2011
this ia AMAAZING! i'm doing your cover i promised you- I AM SO SORRY IT TOOK THIS LONG!!! SCHOOL HAS BEEN KILLLINGGGG ME! 
Munni101 Munni101 Nov 22, 2010
Seems interesting! But don't write some words in text speak! Makes it confusing! =P
                              The poem was lovely in the beginning and the descriptions? Epic.
                              I love your name btw! Benish! :P My Mom's....cousin! Is called that ><
                              
Arkain Arkain Nov 22, 2010
loved the way you were unique and started it with a poem.
                              Interesting prologue as well 
MMP810 MMP810 Nov 22, 2010
i LOVED the poem in the beginning..you're extremely talented! keep up the wonderful work!!!
Jessie137 Jessie137 Nov 19, 2010
I loved the poem!! Did you write it? It was really deep and beautiful and sad all at the same time.
Mgoose2 Mgoose2 Sep 09, 2010
You messaged me about a week ago asking me to read your story.  Well i have just read the first part and i love it.  The poem is perfectly written and the prologue leaves me begging for more.  Thank you for asking me to read it.