WITH EVERY BREATH YOU TAKE

WITH EVERY BREATH YOU TAKE

10.9K Reads 99 Votes 20 Part Story
widevrybreathutake By widevrybreathutake Updated Nov 20, 2010

ROMANCE

  • cole
  • elizebeth
  • lady
  • lizy
  • love
  • story
RebeccaElizabethHill RebeccaElizabethHill Jun 12, 2011
this ia AMAAZING! i'm doing your cover i promised you- I AM SO SORRY IT TOOK THIS LONG!!! SCHOOL HAS BEEN KILLLINGGGG ME! 
Munni101 Munni101 Nov 22, 2010
Seems interesting! But don't write some words in text speak! Makes it confusing! =P
                              The poem was lovely in the beginning and the descriptions? Epic.
                              I love your name btw! Benish! :P My Mom's....cousin! Is called that ><
                              
Arkain Arkain Nov 22, 2010
loved the way you were unique and started it with a poem.
                              Interesting prologue as well 
MMP810 MMP810 Nov 22, 2010
i LOVED the poem in the beginning..you're extremely talented! keep up the wonderful work!!!
Jessie137 Jessie137 Nov 19, 2010
I loved the poem!! Did you write it? It was really deep and beautiful and sad all at the same time.
Mgoose2 Mgoose2 Sep 09, 2010
You messaged me about a week ago asking me to read your story.  Well i have just read the first part and i love it.  The poem is perfectly written and the prologue leaves me begging for more.  Thank you for asking me to read it.