If I run

If I run

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thejoker42 By thejoker42 Completed

" so if I ran right now, you wouldn't do anything" I asked " correct" he said with that oh so famous smirk of his "well, screw you" I said throwing my shoes and grabbing my dress and I started running but he caught my hand " Abigail, I was joking... I would hunt you down to the ends of the earth" he said looking into my eyes " and if I jumped?" " I would pull you back up... But please don't test that theory" he said with a smile.

Seems like a nice story. Just need to break it up into paragraphs and make the convo more distinguished. Like show the lines without it being smushed into the rest of the story
tazzluv tazzluv Dec 29, 2014
you did a really good job great description  I really liked it