Moonless Midnights (A werewolf Story) ON HOLD

Moonless Midnights (A werewolf Story) ON HOLD

7.1K Reads 119 Votes 5 Part Story
Alice By aliceinwonderland831 Updated Jun 19, 2011

A story about a 18 year old girl who discovers she's half werewolf and half vampire. She is destined to save the vampires from their mortal enemy, the dark angels, but she faces many challenges when she falls in love with the one person she is forbidden to have any friendship with.

tidalkid tidalkid Jun 17, 2011
Hey, interesting start!  I really like it.  You have a lot of dialogue, which is good - perhaps a little too much dialogue?  Maybe you could add a bit more description.  Anyway, I reallylike it, keep it up!
LullabyOfLillies LullabyOfLillies Jun 17, 2011
I'm writing a werewolf story too XD This one is really good!
StandingOnThinIce StandingOnThinIce Jun 16, 2011
this is pretty good, cliche, but good. When some one is talking don't upper case all the letters. Remember punctuation and grammar! I usually don't care for werewolfs but this is quite good!
spazzxstick spazzxstick Aug 06, 2010
Awesome :) :) :) 
                              
                              I really like it and the change in titles, it doesn't really blend in with the other titles on this site, it sticks out in a damn good way ^^
                              
                              I also like how you started this chapter as well x ]
                              Off to the next chapter ... 
                              cedesx
aliceinwonderland831 aliceinwonderland831 Jul 22, 2010
I would also love for suggestions for another title for this story because I might change  it
aliceinwonderland831 aliceinwonderland831 Jul 22, 2010
I added a slideshow so you know what most of the characters look like