My Other Half [ COMPLETED ]

My Other Half [ COMPLETED ]

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fallingintoabyss016 By fallingintoabyss016 Completed

Finally having the once in a year summer break, Yumiko Fujimoto decided to fly back home to Japan from America to finally see her best friend, Yui Komori, again.

However, their reunion wouldn't last long because Yui will be living with her father's distant relatives while the man is away for a job overseas. Then one night, Yumiko couldn't stand her best friend's cries. She decided to accompany Yui on her trip to the place her Papa told her and she met the Sakamaki brothers...

At first, she was really annoyed at them while the guys are suspicious until Laito noticed what something is amiss about her. Turns out that she looked exactly like Subaru. But he's not just like a gender bend of her, but he's also her long lost twin brother and the keys hanging around their necks proves it.

Now being the sweet and caring little sister the brothers adore, what will happen if her dream of finally having a family turns into a forbidden love to win her heart? Will she be the reason they'll break apart? or will she bring peace to them?

And what about Yui? Will their friendship also break apart? And who is this mysterious person she always sees inside the mansion?

This a story of love, friendship, family and betrayal...

  • angst
  • ayato
  • diabolik
  • drama
  • family
  • friendship
  • kanato
  • komori
  • laito
  • lovers
  • reiji
  • sakamaki
  • shu
  • subaru
  • yui
kkanyoria kkanyoria Jul 23, 2017
You r not that bad in writing but stop using short cut in words,(eg."pic" instead picture) not all over us know sheng
Cookiecat33Orginal Cookiecat33Orginal Aug 02, 2016
Great story but you know that they can't possibly have a sister remember.
AlexLin0 AlexLin0 Nov 22, 2016
Short, but an interesting start. A really loving sibling relationship!
janice312014 janice312014 Mar 27, 2016
Who's the brother, who's the brother, who's the brother?! (Silly voice)
                              Please i beg of you!😢 Tell meeee!!~
chattox3 chattox3 Nov 03, 2016
Hey, I originally speak English, (American m8) and even though I don't really post on here I could use something to do, so if you want a (kinda) editor than I guess I could do it,  (I can do it for free, because if you payed me it would be child labor)
ImStuckInTomorrow ImStuckInTomorrow Jan 07, 2017
Well could have made it more detailed...., but I guess it's alright for a beginning