The Elementals: Playing with fire

The Elementals: Playing with fire

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Brittany Kenway By BrittanyKenway Completed

People always say kittens are more fun than cats. If only they remained kittens longer, much longer. I guess my dad thought the same with me when he shipped me off to boarding school for the 'gifted'. If you could call it that.

Aight, you've caught my interest. Also, please don't feel offended when I comment certain things, seeing that I have a short temper, and when a protagonist does stupid things, i tend to 'blow up.'
midnight-disaster midnight-disaster Oct 01, 2011
its so true about the dreaming thing. you have me intrigued. reading on :)
fantasy343 fantasy343 Aug 08, 2011
They way you leave it hanging about what kind of gifted boarding school it is, is a good touch. So far I enjoy it. Nice reference about a child growing up to a kitten. Which I agree, I love kittens more. Anyways, onward to next chapter!
blackveilbride88 blackveilbride88 Aug 03, 2011
I like the short, grabbing intro it's really well written and makes me want to read more which I shall!:D
homesickaliens homesickaliens Aug 03, 2011
Great start! I love that the introduction is short - really grabs the reader's attention. Reading on, hehe (: *Voted. ;D
AislinnRiley AislinnRiley Jul 31, 2011
Its very short, but very poetic and simple.  Perfect to capture the attention of your readers!