People always say kittens are more fun than cats. If only they remained kittens longer, much longer. I guess my dad thought the same with me when he shipped me off to boarding school for the 'gifted'. If you could call it that.
Aight, you've caught my interest. Also, please don't feel offended when I comment certain things, seeing that I have a short temper, and when a protagonist does stupid things, i tend to 'blow up.'
its so true about the dreaming thing. you have me intrigued. reading on :)
They way you leave it hanging about what kind of gifted boarding school it is, is a good touch. So far I enjoy it. Nice reference about a child growing up to a kitten. Which I agree, I love kittens more. Anyways, onward to next chapter!
I like the short, grabbing intro it's really well written and makes me want to read more which I shall!:D
Great start! I love that the introduction is short - really grabs the reader's attention. Reading on, hehe (: *Voted. ;D
Its very short, but very poetic and simple. Perfect to capture the attention of your readers!