Short story about love, loss and finding hope even in the darkest of times.
Really good for a short story. I enjoyed it, even though it was sad.
OH WOW THAT IS SO AMAZING BUT YOU NEED TO KEEP IT UP U NEARLY HAD ME IN TEARS LOL X
@Deep4141 Thanks i never really thought about writing more but i know the story really isn't finished so i'm thinking of writing more ;-D
I like it ..............quite touching. Having cancer is such a pain.........I have come across so many of such afflicted people. This is a nice bit of writing, keep it up !!! ;-))
@1nOnly thankyou sooo much i'm new to all this so getting msgs, votes and comments makes me day so thanks again and keep reading
@ColdTouch well i wrote it for this competion my teacher wanted me to enter andi had heaps more but had to cut it so it fit within the word limit
do u think i should add more to it?