The Final Beats of a Dying Heart

The Final Beats of a Dying Heart

310 Reads 6 Votes 1 Part Story
Rae Murphy By RaeMurphy Completed

Short story about love, loss and finding hope even in the darkest of times.

    KaitofScottland KaitofScottland Jun 02, 2011
    Really good for a short story. I enjoyed it, even though it was sad.
    TinaBean TinaBean Jan 24, 2011
    OH WOW THAT IS SO AMAZING BUT YOU NEED TO KEEP IT UP U NEARLY HAD ME IN TEARS LOL X
    RaeMurphy RaeMurphy Aug 06, 2010
    @Deep4141 Thanks i never really thought about writing more but i know the story really isn't finished so i'm thinking of writing more ;-D 
    Deep4141 Deep4141 Aug 05, 2010
    I like it ..............quite touching. Having cancer is such a pain.........I have come across so many of such afflicted people. This is a nice bit of writing, keep it up !!!  ;-))
    RaeMurphy RaeMurphy Jul 23, 2010
    @1nOnly thankyou sooo much i'm new to all this so getting msgs, votes and comments makes me day so thanks again and keep reading
                                  
                                  ~tahani~
                                  xx
    RaeMurphy RaeMurphy Jul 22, 2010
    @ColdTouch well i wrote it for this competion my teacher wanted me to enter andi had heaps more but had to cut it so it fit within the word limit
                                  do u think i should add more to it? 
                                  tahani
                                  xx