The Final Beats of a Dying Heart

The Final Beats of a Dying Heart

310 Reads 6 Votes 1 Part Story
Rae Murphy By RaeMurphy Completed

Short story about love, loss and finding hope even in the darkest of times.

KaitofScottland KaitofScottland Jun 02, 2011
Really good for a short story. I enjoyed it, even though it was sad.
TinaBean TinaBean Jan 24, 2011
OH WOW THAT IS SO AMAZING BUT YOU NEED TO KEEP IT UP U NEARLY HAD ME IN TEARS LOL X
RaeMurphy RaeMurphy Aug 06, 2010
@Deep4141 Thanks i never really thought about writing more but i know the story really isn't finished so i'm thinking of writing more ;-D 
Deep4141 Deep4141 Aug 05, 2010
I like it ..............quite touching. Having cancer is such a pain.........I have come across so many of such afflicted people. This is a nice bit of writing, keep it up !!!  ;-))
RaeMurphy RaeMurphy Jul 23, 2010
@1nOnly thankyou sooo much i'm new to all this so getting msgs, votes and comments makes me day so thanks again and keep reading
                              
                              ~tahani~
                              xx
RaeMurphy RaeMurphy Jul 22, 2010
@ColdTouch well i wrote it for this competion my teacher wanted me to enter andi had heaps more but had to cut it so it fit within the word limit
                              do u think i should add more to it? 
                              tahani
                              xx