Undiscovered Secrets

Undiscovered Secrets

9.9K Reads 353 Votes 12 Part Story
NightSpirit By NightSpirit Updated Jul 21, 2011

(Aka: The Dark Figure Changed My Life Around) Maya was just like any other average nineteen year old. That was until she was being followed one day by The Dark Figure. On finding out who The Dark Figure is Maya stumbles across a secret that will change her life forever. A secret her family has kept from her, a secret that she unknowingly is being protected from, but why? and what happens when she finds out two secret agencies want her, but why?

  • agency
  • agent
  • agents
  • dark
  • darkfigure
  • date
  • dress
  • fantasy
  • faye
  • fiction
  • figure
  • hidden
  • hideout
  • humor
  • kiss
  • lies
  • maya
  • mission
  • missions
  • mystery
  • operative
  • party
  • phoenix
  • pool
  • revenge
  • romance
  • school
  • secret
  • secrets
  • special
  • spy
  • suspence
  • teen
  • thriller
  • training
  • truth
  • tuxedo
  • undiscoveredgem
thatstheway thatstheway Jul 20, 2011
hmm very nice :) I felt like you could feel the anticipation more, but at the same time the emotions could be stronger.. not as distant but could still be more personal closer.. the suspense factor was good but slightly lacking off to chapter tres :)
EmmaWilliams66 EmmaWilliams66 Jul 19, 2011
I dont normally read these types of stories but i think its really good and i am going to contnue to read
Somnos Somnos Jul 14, 2011
Interesting turn of events and you have great diction in your writing that fits everything very well. This isn't my type of story, but I can tell why people would like it!
                              
                              Good job! *.*
witchangel witchangel Jul 13, 2011
This is really amazing work I'm so glad I started reading!!!!!!!!! Soooo going to read on lol great job!!!!
concentricxx concentricxx Jul 12, 2011
oh boy, this could definitely be a movie or something! haha, the suspense was insane...great job(:
Xenia_Hopps Xenia_Hopps Jul 12, 2011
I'M SCARY BECAUSE THIS REALLY CREEPED ME OUT.LOL BUT IT WAS SOOOO GOOD!:)