Pandora

Pandora

949 Reads 13 Votes 5 Part Story
LizzY By Lizzyy Updated Apr 10, 2011

Eli also known as Pandora loses the most important thing, her life. It started when her parents died, she was expected to go a orphanage and start all over . But when she meets Derek in the hospital she takes a different path. The only thing she is looking is to find some beauty in her life and maybe love.

Lizzyy Lizzyy Jul 29, 2010
@Rose_13  thx and thx u for telling me that! im not that good at grammer but im working on it!! :)
Rose_13 Rose_13 Jul 29, 2010
Very interesting!! 
                              ur story needs a little work on grammer tho. i`m not trying to be mean b/c ur story is really good. the only reason y i`m telling u this is so it can maybe help u make it even better!
                              really like it so far... & on to the next chapter!! : )
                              
vincevillan2217 vincevillan2217 Mar 28, 2010
Please continue I wanna see where this is going. 
                              "That was the only time I remember my mom not smiling."
                                   ^ my favorite line 
                              i don't know why I like it I just do lol.