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In My Saviors Arms

In My Saviors Arms

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ElizabethDaisy By ElizabethDaisy Updated Feb 05, 2012

Grayson's life was officially perfect. His brother had finally started treating him a little less like a loser, girls were actually stopping and talking to him, and he even got his moment of fame on TV. And after going through a dull life of the same old everyday routine, excitement ran right in to him. Literally! 

Meet Kyhra. A strange and different girl with the attention span of a fly and the energy of a two year old. And when her and Grayson meet, they find themselves unable to forget about each other. But with Grayson living states away and Kyhra in an abusive orphanage unable to leave, how are they ever supposed to be together? I guess love will always find a way... right?

ElizabethDaisy ElizabethDaisy Feb 07, 2012
Thank you so much! I'm glad you both like my story so far. Also, thank you for being truthful and pointing out my mistakes, I will try to correct them from now on =)
XxURbeautifulxX XxURbeautifulxX Feb 07, 2012
That was really intense, but good. There were a few grammerical and spelling mistakes, but who am I to tell you when I don't even proof read. Overall it's pretty good, I barely read from a guy's point of view so I'm looking foreward to it.