In the Eyes of Jacob

In the Eyes of Jacob

33K Reads 1.9K Votes 36 Part Story
emerald By EmmeMeadows Completed

Antebellum Period. What do you think of? Cotton? Plantations? Slaves? When a young girl gets a birthday present from her father, her life will change like no other. Disappointment and acceptance, why stay when you can run? Why hate when you can love? Color make us separate, but blood makes us equal. In his deep ebony eyes, she is the world. In her glistening emerald eyes, he is her life. In the end, hearts will exceed beliefs when differences collide.

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It's nice, i think it's the guy she saw earlier but good job
- - Sep 19, 2015
This story has really caught my attention. I wanna see where this goes. I wanna see the main charaters on the cover. Will they become friends? Oh i.know im jumping ajead of myself. I like how she was concerned for the "poor soul" i see her father as being a big bearded qhite man
indigosuns indigosuns Sep 05, 2015
But I really like how it's a period piece! Was there a lot of research needed? I love historical fiction and always wanted to write one, but I get carried away when I do research and end up just reading a bunch of articles instead!
indigosuns indigosuns Sep 05, 2015
I think there should be more things happening in the chapter. Maybe some more conversion between Faith and Caroline? It needs a little more substance to help with character development
indigosuns indigosuns Sep 05, 2015
Just write it for yourself! That's the only way you'll be pleased with it!
Veauner Veauner Jul 17, 2015
Although bolding not helps show the cruelty, it's no encouraged in a book.