The Fence

The Fence

61.2K Reads 4K Votes 90 Part Story
Maddie 马康連 By mrmcafee Completed

Reached #13 in Scifi
18-year-old Kirbena Marcus' city is surrounded by an iron barb fence that keeps out the aliens that had taken over the world years earlier. Ever since, Kirbena has dreamed of leaving the city to help destroy the creatures that had locked her up inside. But when Kirbena meets a mysterious Grey, her beliefs are turned upside down. Kirbena is forced to make a decision. Either she betrays him, or she sides with the very creature she was meant to destroy.

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Katrob7282 Katrob7282 Jan 10
She is in a good caste, yet has financial troubles (hard time affording breakfast)...
Kind of reminds me of The Giver and The Hungry Games so far...
Swivellion Swivellion Nov 29, 2016
Wait...I have a question. I can see how she is struggling financially, but why? She lives in Caste Two right? So shouldn't she be right next to the rich people?
DavidEdyn DavidEdyn Feb 03
"This is One of the Greatest Stories I Ever Read"
                              - David Edyn
ASecretNote-A ASecretNote-A Feb 09, 2015
Amazing story, you are such a great writer great detail! I really enjoy this story you should really continue writing more things! You are really creative!
                               - A
Sid_Ed Sid_Ed Dec 22, 2014
CHILD I SWEAR  IF YOU DONT'T FINISH THIS... I WILL BE VERY UPSET PLEASE WRITE MORE OKAY THANKS