The Fence

The Fence

43.9K Reads 3.1K Votes 90 Part Story
Maddie 马康連 By mrmcafee Completed

Reached #19 in Scifi
18-year-old Kirbena Marcus' city is surrounded by an iron barb fence that keeps out the aliens that had taken over the world years earlier. Ever since, Kirbena has dreamed of leaving the city to help destroy the creatures that had locked her up inside. But when Kirbena meets a mysterious Grey, her beliefs are turned upside down. Kirbena is forced to make a decision. Either she betrays him, or she sides with the very creature she was meant to destroy.

*Currently editing*

Swivellion Swivellion Nov 29
Ooooohhhh. Now I understand. Never mind my question last chapter.
Swivellion Swivellion Nov 29
Wait...I have a question. I can see how she is struggling financially, but why? She lives in Caste Two right? So shouldn't she be right next to the rich people?
ASecretNote-A ASecretNote-A Feb 09, 2015
Such a great writer I Really love your writing style and I think that
                              You should really continue writing on other stories too! I can't wait to read more of what you write! - A
ASecretNote-A ASecretNote-A Feb 09, 2015
Amazing story, you are such a great writer great detail! I really enjoy this story you should really continue writing more things! You are really creative!
                               - A
Sid_Ed Sid_Ed Dec 22, 2014
Okay so after talking to the author, I have come to a few conclusions. 1: This story is going to be REALLY good 2: SHE BETTER BE WRITING MORE BECAUSE I AM TO IMPATIENT AND SHE WON'T TELL ME SPOILERS! *clears throat* that is all
Sid_Ed Sid_Ed Dec 22, 2014
CHILD I SWEAR  IF YOU DONT'T FINISH THIS... I WILL BE VERY UPSET PLEASE WRITE MORE OKAY THANKS