Don't say a word...

Don't say a word...

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Chelsey By chelseyleanne44 Completed

"dad i cant do this its not right just leave me alone please i beg you please please daddy don't not again please..." I cried in pain begging for him to stop 

"Ill do whatever i want you ungrateful little bitch"he snarled 

He hurt me mentally, physically and emotionally just as he was about to leave he turns to face me presses his finger to my lips " don't say a word..." 

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I would probably read this if the spelling and grammar was considerably better. I don't know how people (and so many) can read it.
Can you spell at all? Punctuation? Sorry,but your story sucks ass.
vaevae25 vaevae25 Jun 18
Wow this was very stupid nice story but how can she be so bruised and no one came to aid.no broken bones?what is her problem her dad is a piece of turd and her mom didn't realise it wow
Okay, I'm understanding that this is sad but, can you please use correct grammar and punctuation? (By the way, not being rude on anyways)
greymendes greymendes Feb 27
That is so sad I bet a little voice in the dads mind is telling him to stop but all the drugs take over his body
room19kohi room19kohi Mar 08
i love the way you put it out there because u are a really good writer