my new mate

my new mate

282K Reads 7.9K Votes 34 Part Story
sephoria.R. By sephoriaLove Completed

what happens when you find your soul mate, you both marry and are expecting a baby well  when Violet was going on a trip with her husband jaxson then they get hit by a drunk driver. when she wakes up from the hospital she finds out she lost both people she loved with all her heart
a few years later she moves back home to her old pack,
Her father force her to mate with a neighboring packs Alpha.
will she ever fall in love with him or would she be alone forever.

sephoriaLove sephoriaLove Jun 13, 2015
sorry it's been a while I have been really busy lately I forgot my characters for a sec hopefully you guys like it I'm moving as we speak from sunshine state FL to
                              Birdland Maryland
Hopelesslyboring Hopelesslyboring Feb 22, 2015
Omg, he's a jackA #, what a jerk , though I'm enjoying the story 
angyzacarias angyzacarias Feb 18, 2015
Hi, so far so good. And please don't "attack" me as a hater, but this page is confusing since you jump from third person to first person (narrator). There is also the "they, "they're", "their" mistake when the narrator is talking about the two teenagers... 
                              Don't take bad this little "criticism" XO
Mimomanning Mimomanning Feb 08, 2015
Hi! Sorry if I sound rude but I found your story really good the only thing is you need to find an editor so it becomes awesome :) have a great day