Beautiful Fury

Beautiful Fury

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savannah By ew-get-away Updated Aug 01

After a horrible accident, Mara was given another chance at life; a life lurking in the depths of the ocean. 

She's caught in between good and evil. Her soul is still intact, but it's infused with darkness. 

Mara resides in the harsh waters of the Atlantic, near the coast of Maine, and busies herself with sinking the yachts of the rich and manipulative. After every sink, though, she's shrouded with guilt; guilt that is slowly diminishing everyday. 

When Zander Mitchell, in all his arrogant, cocky, miserable glory, sails Mara's waters, she'd oddly fascinated by the human.  

Little does she know that he could be the key to her demise or the key to unlock the good in her that was pushed deep down for far too long.

Mara is dark and dangerous, but Zander is drawn to her beautiful, indescribable fury.

MikaYuuBabe MikaYuuBabe Sep 30, 2015
This is really really good. Wow, this should have way more views
RebeccaSky RebeccaSky Sep 01, 2015
Excellent opening paragraph, it really captures the readers attention!
rosaimee rosaimee Aug 30, 2015
I like how you narrate this story combining sadness and terror! Is action packed and that's a great read!
AnnieRosebud AnnieRosebud Aug 27, 2015
I loved the parallels between Elena's and Mara's death by being thrown into the water. 
                              Also, very intriguing descriptions of your mermaid!