Rejecting a Child of the Moon

Rejecting a Child of the Moon

238K Reads 6.5K Votes 22 Part Story
pinklol156 By pinklol156 Completed

16 year oldSky smith was loved till the day of her parents death. Abused and forced to take care of the packs needs. Her own brothers blamed her. She is rejected by the soon to be Alpha Jay Slade. She runs away. But no one knows that she is the ....... read to find out

  • baby
  • mates
  • moongoddess
  • rejection
  • wattys2017
  • werewolf
ChrisyLeo21 ChrisyLeo21 Jul 28
I like this, but you could've taken your time. As a reader I need more information. An expansion of what is already there. We need details 🤓
loveleyangel loveleyangel Mar 11, 2016
Thy escalated so quickly I was just like "oh look there comes the bus" for this story and then it stopped for like a split second not even enough time to know what is happening like "let me just get of the bench at the bus stop wait where did the bus go augghhhh "
IchiBallz IchiBallz Sep 03, 2016
Starting with "My name" is not a good start to the story. You're writing is under level and horribly written.
TheyCallMe11 TheyCallMe11 Aug 31, 2016
In my book.. the name of the pack is the Silver moon pack though. ... omg... that's weird
biinky23 biinky23 Jan 18
Do you not know how to spell and use correct grammar and punctuation?
alythe1bitch alythe1bitch Jun 21, 2016
"This nïgga just slapped me"😂😂😂😂😂 I would have said the same thing 😂💀