Altered

Altered

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Sorcha De Brún By SorchaDeBrun Completed

'They wore uniform grey, their expression hard and distant, their muscles taut with expectation, as if at any moment they were ready to lead an assault, to carry out orders, to kill, to die. And yet they were. Kingston had trained these children to kill at a word, to obey their masters without question. They were machines, the ultimate weapons in modern warfare. Children, as young as seven and as old as eighteen, stood impeccable and fearless, but it was what was hidden in their minds that was to be feared most of all.'

Nineteen-year-old Charlotte Owens has entered her final year at Kingston Academy and, together with her best friends, she plans on making it through the year in one piece, away from the scrutinising eye of the headmaster and the founder's son. However, when she discovers that she has been thrust into the role of Head Girl, working alongside a boy she can hardly stand, not only are her plans for anonymity destroyed, but her plans for making it through the year at all seem to be in danger of becoming a wistful dream. Charlotte finds herself faced with the monstrous task of learning to play a game for survival in a world that seems determined to destroy her. Not only fighting for her life, Charlotte must also fight to gain control over the genetic alterations that plague her mind, in an effort to become the soldier she must be. 

A dark and tense tale of the battle between good and evil, Altered brings to life a strange and deadly world full of power and intrigue, as well as casting light on many secrets that so many hoped would remain undiscovered.

This is Book One of Altered

I probably don't have anything to say that you haven't heard before, but your word choice, and layout of the chapter is amazing, even as you're describing other things I can see Charlotte hurrying along across the campus. I already loathe Bennett though, which is also an excellent job on your part.
pandadojo pandadojo Mar 07
I literally am addicted to this book right now. Your writing is SO GOOD I love it!!!
Very well written; there's so much imagery but it enhances the writing instead of slowing it down! <3
DoraKelly DoraKelly Sep 10
Why does this device never get mentioned again in the books, what good or bad did it ever get used for or did I miss something? What did it control?
Yes very smooth and descriptive. The morbidity of the place, her perfection, as a person, not a genetically engineered killing machine. Though Bennet is cruel, we know who would win.
ValeyRiver ValeyRiver Mar 18
I like the tension and suspense here because you don't mention exactly who Bennett is. Great