To Be Avenged

To Be Avenged

6.7K Reads 86 Votes 10 Part Story
Brianna MacLean By cold_blooded_freak Updated Jan 15, 2011

This story is about two sisters that were murdered and they later haunt their little brother that was born two years after their murder.  He has never been told about his sisters, so they seek revenge, killing his, as well as their, parents.  The oldest tells him to kill their killer.  He refuses at first but soon listens to her after she begins to ruin his life.

cold_blooded_freak cold_blooded_freak May 14, 2012
@Carlos_Rodriguez 
                              i'm sorry, I will try to rewrite it but if you would like, feel free to write one that will adhere to your standards. ;)
_letlive_again _letlive_again Apr 11, 2012
Is it just me or did your little blurb just spoil the whole story? :(  You give too much away!
cold_blooded_freak cold_blooded_freak Apr 01, 2012
Well if the first chapter is all you read then yes there is more. Eight more chapters as a matter a fact. But if you've read the entire story then yes there is still more. But my computer needs to be fixed to get the rest of the story of of it.
Immanuel_IMG Immanuel_IMG Nov 09, 2011
Oh dear... who the hell kills their own parents because they didn't tell their new son they had her before??!?!!? O.o Scary!
cold_blooded_freak cold_blooded_freak Jan 17, 2011
@BrianF 
                              In a way yes, I heard about this and I began writing this story. If you reads on it's pretty much my rendition of the continuation of the ledgend.
cold_blooded_freak cold_blooded_freak Jul 31, 2010
@jemsparkle 
                              Thanks! I read one of the stupid chain letters and had so many ideas to continue the story, so I did.