My Poems

My Poems

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ageofthewriters By ageofthewriters Updated Jul 01, 2011

A Real Fighter

The sounds of the crowd yelling and screaming,

The pain you feel when the punch makes contact with your body.

The pain you feel everytime you think you are more and more away 

from your dream of becoming the best fighter in the world. 

The laughter of your opponent when he sees you are defeated, 

and can't do any more, except to give up. 

The faces of everyone when they see you on the floor, 

laughing at you. 

The feeling of that pain, 

fulfilling your will to never give up 

and continue fighting until your body can't anymore. 

That's what make you different from everyone else.

What gives you the power 

and will to keep trying 

and never back down. 

That's what make you a 


  • fighter
  • real
Anne123 Anne123 Oct 08, 2011
@ageofthewriters Haha. That's what you call natural talent. ;) Didn't catch you online.
plaguemelove plaguemelove Jul 02, 2011
I love this alot. it is wow. Better than my poems, and thats a fact. A huge major fact. And it seems like it is about someone, so seems like u r getting the hang of poetry, DQ. Keep it up. can't wait to read more from you. :)
plaguemelove plaguemelove Jun 12, 2011
Still gives me the chills everytime I read it. Brings me back 4 years ago.
plaguemelove plaguemelove May 19, 2011
I love it because this poem has many meanings more than one. And thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for dedicatin it to me :D