A Secretary VS A Vice President

A Secretary VS A Vice President

5.4K Reads 86 Votes 22 Part Story
ya, latte By altocumulus Completed

Haha wag niyo nang basahin 'toh, maiirita lang kayo.


Credits to @OkayFineWhatever for the cover

  • fanficfriday
  • leo
  • past
  • school
  • secretary
  • seric
  • valentines
  • vicepresident
Galeberna Galeberna Dec 02
Hindi to para saakin ako ang secretary at ang kaaway ko na pasikreto ay president
seasthemoment seasthemoment Jun 01, 2016
Book is fairly good, but I recommend not putting too many lyrics in the chapter, it distracts the reader and can cause them to lose interest. Also you should include some dialogue to spice up your story, and slow down the time a bit :) Great story, keep going
EllenFairyBlue4 EllenFairyBlue4 Feb 14, 2015
For this chapter. I suggest imagining the scene in your head of the trio at the beach and writing what you see, hear, feel, smell from the image in your head to show readers why this part is important to your story. Too much telling, need to show.
EllenFairyBlue4 EllenFairyBlue4 Feb 14, 2015
Alright, so my first opinion of this story is that you tell to much. You need to show, not tell.