POETRY SERIES ~

POETRY SERIES ~

1.5K Reads 212 Votes 6 Part Story
Valencia By Cocomonetxos Completed

different kinds of poetry.

    Courchesne Courchesne Jan 03, 2011
    This had lots of emotion in it and I got where you were coming from.
                                  Cheating can be extremely painful, and I'm sorry you had to go through that :c
                                  
                                  I'm voting. Other than that, I'd just correct some small spelling errors.
                                  Keep writing definitely :)
    Cocomonetxos Cocomonetxos Dec 23, 2010
    @darkdestiny thanks ! :D & it's okay im glad you checked it out.
    darkdestiny darkdestiny Dec 12, 2010
    well i got around to checking out your work...im late sorry!!!! but..wowza!!!! so much emotion is behind those words!!! its beautiful...u have my vote
    Cocomonetxos Cocomonetxos Aug 28, 2010
    @Just-Nikki that's how I really felt at the time & thanks lol <3.
    Just-Nikki Just-Nikki Aug 26, 2010
    Wow all I can say is:
                                  That's deep. 
                                  
                                  (I sound really cheesy I know)
                                  
                                  Yeah maybe do some spacing out but seriously this is some good poetry but damn this is so sad ;(
                                  
                                  I say: Bash that cheater. Now. ^^
                                  -vote-
    Addicted-Writer-101 Addicted-Writer-101 Aug 25, 2010
    @Cupcake90 Thanks! ok! it's easier to do it on Microsoft, wattpad scrolls up every time you press a button