POETRY SERIES ~

POETRY SERIES ~

1.5K Reads 212 Votes 6 Part Story
Valencia By Cocomonetxos Completed

different kinds of poetry.

Courchesne Courchesne Jan 03, 2011
This had lots of emotion in it and I got where you were coming from.
                              Cheating can be extremely painful, and I'm sorry you had to go through that :c
                              
                              I'm voting. Other than that, I'd just correct some small spelling errors.
                              Keep writing definitely :)
Cocomonetxos Cocomonetxos Dec 23, 2010
@darkdestiny thanks ! :D & it's okay im glad you checked it out.
darkdestiny darkdestiny Dec 12, 2010
well i got around to checking out your work...im late sorry!!!! but..wowza!!!! so much emotion is behind those words!!! its beautiful...u have my vote
Cocomonetxos Cocomonetxos Aug 28, 2010
@Just-Nikki that's how I really felt at the time & thanks lol <3.
Just-Nikki Just-Nikki Aug 26, 2010
Wow all I can say is:
                              That's deep. 
                              
                              (I sound really cheesy I know)
                              
                              Yeah maybe do some spacing out but seriously this is some good poetry but damn this is so sad ;(
                              
                              I say: Bash that cheater. Now. ^^
                              -vote-
Addicted-Writer-101 Addicted-Writer-101 Aug 25, 2010
@Cupcake90 Thanks! ok! it's easier to do it on Microsoft, wattpad scrolls up every time you press a button