Mine to Keep

Mine to Keep

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hippie__misfit By hippie__misfit Updated Feb 08

Meet Rose Parrish is your typical just out of college kid. She's been staying at her parents house and working at the local diner to pay off her student loans. One day she was walking home from work in the alley, when she was stopped by a strange man and taken hostage. Later to find out she's his mate.
  
  Meet Ian Sinister he claims to be the Alpha of the lycans. He's spent hundreds of years looking for his "mate." He knew that she was out there somewhere and he finally found her, and will do anything to keep her.

Will Rose eventually get away from her kidnapper or will she be stuck with him forever and turned. A new guy comes in and now she's confused about her feelings for him. He says she's his true mate, but she doesn't believe him. But no matter what she thinks, he will never let her go.

MajiNor MajiNor Dec 28, 2016
Yeah. Was wondering to but good start. Yes increase you chapter length
blackrosedrop blackrosedrop Jan 13, 2016
Wow this is certainly dramatic, wonder where she'll find herself when waking up. Just want to suggest making your chapters a little longer to appeal more to Wattpad readers, and maybe adding some more emotive descriptions too.  Wonder who this guy is ...