Fall From Grace

Fall From Grace

1.4K Reads 51 Votes 9 Part Story
J. Edward Ritchie By JEdwardRitchie Updated Mar 13, 2015

Heaven: a paradise of all that is pure in Creation. Led by brothers Michael and Satanail, the Angelic Host is a testament to cosmic harmony and love. When an unprecedented revelation threatens to uproot their peace, a schism splits the Host’s loyalties. Every angel has to make a choice: faith or freedom. Good or evil. 

Salvation or damnation.

War consumes Heaven in the first and most destructive loss of life that Creation will ever know. As brother turns on brother, the fate of both Heaven and Earth rests in the hands of the Creator’s chosen son, Michael. How far will he go, what will he sacrifice in the name of their Father, to protect his family?

Witness the tragic downfall of a civilization as told from both sides of the bloody rebellion. More than myth, more than legend, Heaven’s war will forever stand as a harrowing warning that even the purest of souls can fall from grace.

  • action
  • adventure
  • angel
  • demon
  • epic
  • heaven
  • war
scriblodeau scriblodeau Sep 03, 2015
A conceptual work of mighty proportions... an exciting race between angelic brothers... and enjoyable to read
JazzFeathers JazzFeathers Mar 15, 2015
This was nice. I liked the display of such different personalities from the two brothers. I can clearly feel that the story will be about this. 
                              
                              Just a little thing: I wouldn't use excalmation marks in the narration. They were quite jerking for me.
AngelaLancaster AngelaLancaster Feb 22, 2015
Very descriptive, I could feel my heart pounding as I was reading and view that race in my mind.  I also can also see the emotions.  Love it!!
Demaince Demaince Feb 05, 2015
Very flamboyant descriptions and I love the reverence of nature and life they have! The characters are so well developed too!
MatthewBennett25 MatthewBennett25 Feb 02, 2015
Majestic, visual, flowing language---well wielded to transport me to another world. Great characterization within the more formal tone of the voice. Dig it! 
chwwalker chwwalker Jan 29, 2015
Really liking this so far! Sounds like it's going to be epic. The worldbuilding and mythology of the angels--their origins, hierarchy, powers, etc.--seems very well done. I am definitely hooked.