The wasted first Kiss.

The wasted first Kiss.

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Keri By Keri8794 Completed

~~ Please realise that this is a rough draft and is the very first story I ever wrote. I know it's not great but give it a chance and please give me a chance by checking out my latest works. They are a big improvement from this story.~~

Fiona Stronghold has spent her life hiding in the shadows surrounded by her only friend, Tony. It's their last year of high school and Fiona has never been kissed BUT... that's about to change.

When Fiona is cast as the lead for the senior winter musical she is suddenly thrown from the shadows and into the spotlight and, she finds she rather enjoys it. With her high school crush, Henry Harrogate playing the lead, Fiona starts believing that maybe things are looking up. Everything changes though when she is told about a scene where she has to kiss Henry. With fear of ruining her first kiss with her secret love in front of strangers, Fiona sets out to fix her problem with the help of Henry's hot best friend Austen James.

Austens solution is simple- she needs to waste her first kiss. And who better to help her than the one who suggested it?

my boyfriend and I met when both of us were drunk and we shared our first kiss then. I'm really excited to see what you do with this :)
Keri8794 Keri8794 Feb 03, 2015
@lilac-styles Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it! I hope you enjoy the other chapters
Keri8794 Keri8794 Feb 03, 2015
@Theusual1 Thank you for the feedback!!!!! I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters! :)
Theusual1 Theusual1 Feb 03, 2015
Plus, the name of the book is very... Interesting and compelling :)
Theusual1 Theusual1 Feb 03, 2015
This is SO GOOD. Can't wait to read it and your style of writing is flawless
liawriter liawriter Jan 27, 2015
great capitalization and punctuation (i hate when books are like that, it makes the author look stupid) maybe add in a couple not as big as plot twists, but something the reader wouldn't expect. but really, great work!