Till we meet again

Till we meet again

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Ms. Sagittarius By Bhaby_love28 Completed

Dahil sa tingin palang ni Brando hindi na kelangan ng magarbong  makeover ni Alex para maramdamang maganda at sexy siya. Brando make her feel special and loved. 
  
 Dealing with insecurities in life is hard but this amazing man make all that disappear. Its like a fairy tale except she is not a princess or a queen but just an ordinary girl with lots reservation. But the question is do fairy tale become a reality?
  
 Alex took something from Brandon and now he want it back until he realize that Its was not his pride he want to get back but it was her heart he want to get.

eiramana325 eiramana325 Mar 05
 #BCN 
                              Ngayon ko lang nalaman ang paminta.. hahaha! May natutunan na naman akong term... thanks
Zetroc143Ella Zetroc143Ella Oct 21, 2016
 #BWRC
                              Ang masasabi ko lang is okay naman yung start at hoping na may bagong twist ito sa kwento dahil nga karamihan sa atin cliché na talaga magsulat. May mga errors pero sabi mo nga draft pa lang so I hope you edit and study about Punctuation Marks para makahatak ka ng potential readers :)
Alhans_10 Alhans_10 Dec 05, 2016
 #BCN
                              Ganda po nang simula kase parang gusto mong tutukan dahil sa dalawang bida. Pero I want you to study your punctuation marks, bit editing yun lang.
JazzmynElva JazzmynElva Oct 17, 2016
 #BWRC 
                              
                              Put some commas if you need to pause in a sentence like for example "Pak, ganern ganern ganern."
Azaciel Azaciel Jan 14
 #BCN
                              
                              I like how this girl and baklish convos. Iyong napansin ko talaga ay ang pagkanatural ng kanilang usapan. This firts parts is reallu okay maliban lang sa mga iilang typos. And also you need to enter space first after the convos and write the narration again..
JazzmynElva JazzmynElva Oct 17, 2016
 #BWRC 
                              
                              Dapat dito may question mark kasi nagtatanong sya in sarcastic way.