My Immortal: The Silver Flower

My Immortal: The Silver Flower

7.2K Reads 76 Votes 9 Part Story
Lights L. By obliviongirl14 Updated Oct 28, 2013

Ellie Trane is fifteen years old and is a ‘half-vampire’. She is not like the others; she can control herself from human blood and is not cold blooded. Ellie must look for her creator after Ari, her protector, dies. Once she meets her creator she learns about the secret of vampires. The silver flower, the most powerful thing on earth that could kill them all. 

PamMosier PamMosier Dec 09, 2010
I like the beginning! It leaves the reader wanting more...to find out who Ari is and why her body temperature is warmer than other vampires.
obliviongirl14 obliviongirl14 Oct 11, 2010
@marthe3103 Thanks :) Not too many people read this story. I love this story. It's one of my favorite that I wrote. 
marthe3103 marthe3103 Oct 10, 2010
wow, this was FREAKING AMAZING. the word i'm left with after reading this was WOW.  but that song is now stuck on my mind. thanks a lot. lol. 
                              
                              anyways i'm off to another chapter.
Darkness94 Darkness94 Jul 27, 2010
@obiviongirl14 hey im new to writing i was wondering if u could read my stories Im marrying Vlad the Implar...i cant be falling in ove with him... can i?! & Escaping the Demon i married, and comment on what u think. how do you make the story into more then one part?
PurpleRain PurpleRain Jul 19, 2010
@obliviongirl14 haha yeah i just haven't been on :s
                              argh now you have my immortal stuck in my head!!
obliviongirl14 obliviongirl14 Jul 19, 2010
@PurpleRain Thank ya very much ^.^ haha
                              PS. did you ever get my message or has this been your first time on in a couple of weeks? :P 
                              I always gotta make sure because you know wattpad -_-