Saved By Me

Saved By Me

32.8K Reads 1.1K Votes 18 Part Story
xXLittleRedLionXx By LittleRedLionxx Updated Jun 05, 2017

When innocent, unexperienced Lola is stuck between the decision of what she wants out of life, she is found wandering along a motorway by mysterious Riley.

  • care
  • danger
  • kidnapped
  • love
  • mystery
  • rescued
  • romance
  • runaway
  • saved
  • thriller
  • trouble
  • wattys2015
awkwardlylrh awkwardlylrh Jun 26, 2016
You'll never know the psychopath sitting next to you
You'll never know the murderer sitting next to you
FuzzyYana FuzzyYana Jul 10, 2016
I ain't got no neck so how is somebody supposed to get my neck
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Seriously
karema20 karema20 Nov 03, 2015
I don't mean to criticize as I too am not perfect, but I don't really like how this sounds like a list. I think using longer sentences with more description would let the reader feel as if he or she is there or feel more connected. 
                              
                              But I guess if this is what you wanted it to be like, fine. :)
karema20 karema20 Nov 01, 2015
And will you be stupid enough to go with him. He seems like a freak!