Renewal; A Tale of Katrina's Kitchen

Renewal; A Tale of Katrina's Kitchen

302 Reads 20 Votes 11 Part Story
Renee Tennis-McKinley By ReneeMcKinley Updated Sep 17, 2015

Renewal, Nebraska, a little town off the beaten track. Katrina's Kitchen, a diner on Main Street. A place that draws those with unusual problems. Owner Katrina Crowe, known as Katie, counsels the people afflicted with those unusual problems.

  • horror
  • supernatural
paulalexgray paulalexgray Apr 25, 2015
That's one helluva intense opening! really captures attention right away.
Robinamy Robinamy Dec 13, 2014
Good - you're holding my interest.  Do proof-read carefully - it's always worth it, so readers aren't distracted by errors.  There's a thne and a couple of possessive apostrophes missing.  The rest are in place so I know you know...! xx
Robinamy Robinamy Dec 12, 2014
Well written - intriguing.  A few textual edits you'll want to correct...
                              
                              (Here's an easy one: it's = it is, otherwise it's its - ALWAYS.  E.g. "Its earliest name...", "Its one window..."  I hope that's helpful) :o)