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Renewal; A Tale of Katrina's Kitchen

Renewal; A Tale of Katrina's Kitchen

302 Reads 20 Votes 11 Part Story
Renee Tennis-McKinley By ReneeMcKinley Updated Sep 17, 2015

Renewal, Nebraska, a little town off the beaten track. Katrina's Kitchen, a diner on Main Street. A place that draws those with unusual problems. Owner Katrina Crowe, known as Katie, counsels the people afflicted with those unusual problems.

paulalexgray paulalexgray Apr 25, 2015
That's one helluva intense opening! really captures attention right away.
Robinamy Robinamy Dec 13, 2014
Good - you're holding my interest.  Do proof-read carefully - it's always worth it, so readers aren't distracted by errors.  There's a thne and a couple of possessive apostrophes missing.  The rest are in place so I know you know...! xx
Robinamy Robinamy Dec 12, 2014
Well written - intriguing.  A few textual edits you'll want to correct...
                              (Here's an easy one: it's = it is, otherwise it's its - ALWAYS.  E.g. "Its earliest name...", "Its one window..."  I hope that's helpful) :o)