Dork Diaries 1 {Editing}

Dork Diaries 1 {Editing}

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s ᴏ ᴘ ʜ ɪ ᴇ By sophie_marek Completed

I'm SOOOO happy right now! SQUUEEEEEE! So today, I was in my boring Bio class. I just wanted to go home and sleep after class, but my crush, Brandon, walked up to me. "Hey, Nikki." he said shyly. He started to blush. 

Why was he talking to a dork like me? Wouldn't he rather be talking to Mackenzie Hollister, the queen bee of WCD? Everyone thought that Mackenzie Hollister was a perfect person without a single flaw, but in reality... she is a shark in designer clothes, Jimmy Choo Flip Flops, and lip gloss!

Anyways...

"Uh...hey." I replied awkwardly. Then I started blushing like a loser. Don't judge! Everyone blushes around their crush! "Well, I was just wondering if you would like to...uhhh..."
"Yes?" I questioned.

What is he going to ask me!!! I'm a curious person and Brandon was pretty much torturing me! What was it?????!!!!! AGHHH!

"If you wanted to... possibly go to the dance next Saturday with me?"

Omg! The dance! Ahhhhhhhh! I'm totally freaking out (which you can probably tel...

smiledobby smiledobby Aug 05
I've read better, but that's the description, punctuation and writing style I'm talking about. The plot/outline is AWESOME!
fastec99 fastec99 May 25
i,m like a total fan of dork diaries and this one high light of my life
DflZara DflZara Aug 07
Ong I love this plz plz plzzz write more of this dork diaries editing plz its amazing!!
Darksoul851 Darksoul851 Aug 20
wait isn't this the second  book? uhh wait... or did I forget?