My Beast

My Beast

101K Reads 2.1K Votes 16 Part Story
Stephanie By Lunasteph Updated Dec 10, 2017

Contains explicit sexual content

He is very powerful, and lethal to their kind.
He is something different, something feared.
He could not be tamed by the best except for one.

I suck at description, but you could read it and see

  • betrayal
  • destiny
  • hate
  • love
  • powers
  • war
Girisharamsumer1985 Girisharamsumer1985 Apr 18, 2017
Due to the extremely bad grammar errors, this book is unreadable.
FloraDesire FloraDesire Apr 30, 2017
i truly don't understand the whole chapter. is this third person perspective? 
                              first she/he was trying to stole something from market for her/his sisters. but then suddenly she/he is in the house and their is a knock. ooppss there were also raining.
                              i am totaly lost here
FloraDesire FloraDesire Apr 30, 2017
conversation should be more mature.. 
                              more details about the surrounds like where they are and whats happening. expressions, their thinking. all that
luva_goodbook luva_goodbook Jul 10, 2017
Good story plot, having trouble connecting the dots, so to speak.
ryoko7 ryoko7 Jul 21, 2017
I think the story should be told in a more mature manner, am a little confused !!!
ZlemajdapttaW ZlemajdapttaW May 29, 2017
I like your story.I will never stop voting!I will comment sometimes.