Contains explicit sexual content
He is very powerful, and lethal to their kind.
He is something different, something feared.
He could not be tamed by the best except for one.
I suck at description, but you could read it and see
The lack of capitalization makes it hard to read. Also, the way the quotations are. I think that you're supoosed to press enter between each person's time to talk when there's not much text in between
Can't u like.. Capitalize the words after "" it feels uncomfortable.. And laurel should be capitalize., I really want to read ur book.. But it makes me uncomfortable,, sorry
Although there are many spelling and grammar errors I love the concept so far and I'm enjoying it!!! Keep praying it up!!
Hey you have a good book it's just you can't spell and your grammar is a little off
I AM or I'M not AM it drives me crazy, and put the dialogues in a manner we can read them easily