My Beast

My Beast

51.5K Reads 1K Votes 14 Part Story
Stephanie By Lunasteph Updated Jun 19, 2016

Contains explicit sexual content

He is very powerful, and lethal to their kind.
He is something different, something feared.
He could not be tamed by the best except for one.

I suck at description, but you could read it and see

rudolph21 rudolph21 Dec 21, 2016
The lack of capitalization makes it hard to read. Also, the way the quotations are. I think that you're supoosed to press enter between each person's time to talk when there's not much text in between
sprklyvenus sprklyvenus Nov 05, 2016
Can't u like.. Capitalize the words after "" it feels uncomfortable.. And laurel should be capitalize., I really want to read ur book.. But it makes me uncomfortable,, sorry
Winter_phantomhive Winter_phantomhive Oct 03, 2016
Although there are many spelling and grammar errors I love the concept so far and I'm enjoying it!!! Keep praying it up!!
whiskers__552 whiskers__552 Dec 02, 2016
Hey you have a good book it's just you can't spell and your grammar is a little off
JuravleAlexandru7 JuravleAlexandru7 Nov 01, 2016
I AM or I'M not AM it drives me crazy, and put the dialogues in a manner we can read them easily