My Beast

My Beast

79.5K Reads 1.7K Votes 15 Part Story
Stephanie By Lunasteph Updated Jul 20

Contains explicit sexual content

He is very powerful, and lethal to their kind.
He is something different, something feared.
He could not be tamed by the best except for one.

I suck at description, but you could read it and see

Due to the extremely bad grammar errors, this book is unreadable.
FloraDesire FloraDesire Apr 30
i truly don't understand the whole chapter. is this third person perspective? 
                              first she/he was trying to stole something from market for her/his sisters. but then suddenly she/he is in the house and their is a knock. ooppss there were also raining.
                              i am totaly lost here
FloraDesire FloraDesire Apr 30
conversation should be more mature.. 
                              more details about the surrounds like where they are and whats happening. expressions, their thinking. all that
Good story plot, having trouble connecting the dots, so to speak.
ryoko7 ryoko7 Jul 21
I think the story should be told in a more mature manner, am a little confused !!!
I like your story.I will never stop voting!I will comment sometimes.