little bird

little bird

39 Reads 2 Votes 1 Part Story
anise By mensa- Completed

"i am a bird, and i am free."

{ one-shot } 
mensa-© 2014

  • bird
  • broken
  • depression
  • desperation
  • doubt
  • free
  • freedom
  • love
  • selfishness
  • suicide
- - Jan 25, 2015
Honestly reminds me of Kiwi on YouTube.
                              
                              Watch it if you haven't.
- - Jan 25, 2015
It's incredible that anybody can get attached to something in a matter of a thousand words or so.
                              It was really sad that she never felt like she was RIGHT. That she was born wrong.
                              And it's sad that a lot of people feel this way.
                              Anyway, great job! :) this was effing upsetting
- - Dec 16, 2014
So freaking sad, I love this. The structure could have been better, abut it's a one shot so... meh. I like the whole birdy part, it's really sweet.
-lattecity -lattecity Dec 13, 2014
This one-shot is so sad. I love it anyways. You are great at writing this.
ridges- ridges- Dec 13, 2014
that was well written, for sure. the first and last sentence definitely hit home for me, wicked job on this.
-Read4life- -Read4life- Dec 07, 2014
I love it! The writing is amazing and there's so much detail c; Keep it up.