Always Something to Lose

Always Something to Lose

42 Reads 2 Votes 2 Part Story
bastille.magnolia~<3 By xxthebeatmonsterxx Completed

“…I can keep you looking young and preserved forever, 
With a fountain to spray on your youth whenever…”
~ A Little Piece of Heaven, Avenged Sevenfold

This story was inspired by this Avenged Sevenfold song and won third place in a contest on DeviantArt.

  • a7x
  • alittlepieceofheaven
  • avengedsevenfold
  • crime
  • death
  • ghosts
  • gore
  • inspiredby
  • murder
  • necrophilia
  • nsfw
  • shortstory
xxthebeatmonsterxx xxthebeatmonsterxx Dec 07, 2014
@alariclocke Thank you for the constructive criticism--I will definitely take it into consideration. I plan to eventually rewrite a slightly longer version of this, but no, I am not going to be including the second part. It's going to be part of a short story collection I'm working on. :)
xxthebeatmonsterxx xxthebeatmonsterxx Dec 06, 2014
@swagdabooty thanks. I'm working on another little short story that's kind of similar.
xxthebeatmonsterxx xxthebeatmonsterxx Dec 04, 2014
@swagdabooty It was for a short story contest. I'm glad you liked it though. :)
3RACHANG 3RACHANG Dec 04, 2014
Awww its a shame that you ended it it was really good! I like the way it ended