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Akatsuki lemons

Akatsuki lemons

48.5K Reads 650 Votes 5 Part Story
Anya Mason By BrokenShadow210 Updated Aug 09, 2016

It does have a lot of sex in it so be warned. I am also horrible at definitions.

I am not trying to be mean, your a great. Writer, but I believe you need to have a plot or need to extend it out more, other than that , it is perfect, remember I'm not trying to be mean, but it's just an opinion
dee2exe_finallyworks dee2exe_finallyworks Apr 07, 2016
This has no grammar whatsoever, and what happened to the punctuation??
synystergatesfoREVer synystergatesfoREVer Jan 21, 2016
I am silently judging you. Grammar. Lack of quotations(" ") and use of tilde(~) in their place. Please, for the sake of the lemon world. Fix this.