Pein's daughter (a naruto fanfic) [Undergoing Major Editing]

Pein's daughter (a naruto fanfic) [Undergoing Major Editing]

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Rika Uzuki By ThatR34llyW3irdGirl Updated Aug 29

Kitori was very young when she was separated from her parents. She was taken in by Rin Nohara and her children, from Konohagakure.

Her biological parents find that it's better if she stays there, because it is safer than what go on in their lives, as they are considered criminals. 

Kitori possesses great abilities as she is also an outgoing child, and will protect her friends and family at all costs. Kitori also, isn't very good at the whole dating thing. But she does her best at everything. 

Kitori is given information about her biological parents who she never knew about. And she wants answers. But how far will she go to get them?

DISCLAIMER: I do NOT own Naruto, or the Naruto characters. I only own, Kitori, and my plot.

  • akatsuki
  • fanfiction
  • leaf
  • naruto
  • peinsdaughter
  • sandsiblingss
  • shinobi
  • team10
  • team7
  • team8
  • team9
Your book is NOT trash, I don't know what that person was trying to get through but whatever it was isn't working because I found your story around last night and I binge read it all I love your book I don't think it needs editing.
It not trash, ur amazing. Why so u think i read and get anxious for new chapters. Those who say it trash should just find what they like, u cant impress everyone.
You did a great job on this book! It isn't trash and you aren't pathetic! This book was and still is amazing! Don't listen to that guy or gal! I just wanted to let you know that
FreakingLEM FreakingLEM Apr 13
It's not pathetic and it's not trash! 
                              The person who commented that just wanted to rile you up, or make you close your story. 
                              Don't listen to them! 
                              Listen to us, we are your readers. 
                              We love your book and know you did a beautiful job writing it!
It was not trash at all I think you did a great job writing this book
Thank you @The_Demonic_Girl @Kaley_Zoldyck @Bubbly_Kookie and @FreakingLEM for your support! But in all honesty, the book really does need a few edits here and there. I don't think I'll be doing anything major, but I will definitely try you all know if I do!