Foxed [2nd/3rd Draft]

Foxed [2nd/3rd Draft]

10.9K Reads 495 Votes 21 Part Story
gossamersilverglow By gossamersilverglow Updated Oct 08

200 million people were killed in a war disguised as WWIII. Now, in 2050, a New World Order reigns.

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UnitedFandoms100 UnitedFandoms100 May 30, 2015
Wow, I love the sound of this! I am a huge fan of dystopias and this seems like a very interesting one :) I am not a political person either so I'm just gonna take whatever you write as granted ;) I can't wait to read on!
verysunshine verysunshine Mar 01, 2015
Wha...
                              I am in! This summery is great. I'm very hyped to do this.
Sabrinachick248 Sabrinachick248 Feb 10, 2015
i would suggest moving this too the description of the book.
Sabrinachick248 Sabrinachick248 Feb 10, 2015
unknown acronym! these are really not good to do unless you plan on telling the meaning soon or if you give away the meaning it ruins your story line
Sabrinachick248 Sabrinachick248 Feb 10, 2015
I was really confused and conflicted at this part. the word is ruled by fourteen men--one world. don't I already know that? I suggest changing the first world into earth or changing the second world to country. if I am misunderstanding something though please explain to me.
SMC_Scookie SMC_Scookie Jan 19, 2015
I’ve been meaning to read this for a while. Rule number 4 feel particularly intriguing. I just know it will come into play. And 5 is a shocker. It says so much about your world without even taking us there. Clear, concise, intriguing – what more could you want?