The Boy Next Door

The Boy Next Door

60.7K Reads 635 Votes 28 Part Story
Debbie By WifeyKPB Updated Mar 07, 2012

How would you feel if your whole world came crumbling down? Not only that, but it was replaced with your worse nightmare...
Who would you turn to....Next door ???

dolly_dhollz dolly_dhollz Jan 21, 2013
omg i was scared to read chapter cus i idk what Chris going to do to ha.. okayy.. here it goes...
PrimosBoo_PSOE PrimosBoo_PSOE Sep 18, 2012
Soo I live in the US buhh you don't know how much I love Misfits gosshh I had to comment as soon I seen that.. Kay.byes
charliesweirdreality charliesweirdreality Apr 09, 2012
I didnt realise her name was 'Honey' i thought that was just what the teacher called her, I like it. Its a cool name.. I like Lamar too :) He seems pretty cool.. But oh no, Chris is back!!! Poor Honey ♥
VanityWhore VanityWhore Dec 22, 2011
I think this is a good story; and with a lot of hard work and determination you could be on the watts hot page. You have a lot of all around description/ details; and a lovely vocabulary.  good job!
                              
                              The one and only,
                              Strangerette.
BlurryWords BlurryWords Dec 22, 2011
Really great start, good description and the dialogue between all the characters  felt very natural and not at all forced. Chris seems like an absolute a-hole.
MusicIsMySoul MusicIsMySoul Nov 02, 2011
Wow, poor girl :( I felt bad for her and I hate Chris. He's a prick. I mean I know you said you cant help it but I think it would do you a world of good if you made the spaces a bit smaller :3 
                              
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