these are just more poems... :)
personally, i like these better.
YES! You used the word 'relentless'! Thanks Kangaroo!
I love, love, that word. It adds a special amount of spice to compositions of writing.
This is....brill. For real. (; i like the thought of a 'sinister memoir'. :)
@orangeroo well, fine then! no, jk xD and no problem... you told me to comment/etc., and i will :P i will critisize when it is needed, trust me ;3
@merbear921 dude, shut up!( in a good way) haha... thanks! :)
we certainly need the "like" tool here! :3 i love the abyss-like depth to all your poems and the like. really, you could so win some contests... i believe you may just have a wonderful talent here. don't let anyone tell you otherwise! ^^ good work.