Stuck in Naruto!!

Stuck in Naruto!!

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SpoopyBabe By SpoopyBabe Updated Jul 22, 2015

Avril a 13 year old girl who had left home and went with her best friend to live with her after something happened to her avril left but she appeared to be in a strange place that she actually recognized

With out spaces, example:
                              "Go to your room, young lady!" said mom. " Why is that?" I said. 
                              Get it?
And when someone does something, like when she went upstairs, don't do it like *she went upstairs* Do it as:
                              I walked upstairs and to my room, closing the door and continuing my way to the roof.
Jesus Christ girl your mom said sorry what else do you fûcking need eh? Your parents getting a divorce? No that's the last thing you need woman like seriously.....
I'll give you some advise, Author. It's better if you didn't use texting language, and when someone talks, you should do it like this:
                              "Go to your room, young lady!" Said mom